W In-class writing;introduction to the course.
H Ways of reading and writing; building and testing
first impressions on practice
readings.
F Accounting for different responses to a reading.
Readings:
"Indian Appetites"
"Just Say 'No."(These pieces will be handed out in class).
M Observing readings; discussion of readings. (Miner)
T Taking notes & marking a text; discussion of
readings.
W Seeing patterns of response (Morris).
H In-class problem on minimum wage in relations to
Gorov.
F Writing in response to our group’s observations
about what we learned from the
minimum wage exercise.
Readings:
Horace Miner, "Body Rituals of the Nacerima" (5-12).
Linda Gorov, "Classes Clashing" (15-17).
Morris, David, "Rootlessness," (99-103).
M Listening to a text (using summaries).
T Making meaning (interpreting reading); discussion
of readings.
W Thinking about paper #1. (You'll receive topic #1 today);
H Seeing a reading within a larger context; discussion
of readings.
F *Evolving a thesis & building a response; 4
journal entries due.
Readings:
“How Anandale Went Out” (handout).
Newsweek essay (handout).
The Economist, "Why Willy Loman Lives," (259).
Adler, Jerry, "Stars and Stripes--Stress," (277).
M Bring three copies of paper #1 to class today.
T Developing your own perspective; discussion
of the reading.
W No class today (Instructor is on university business
during class time).
H Revision workshop.
F Paper #1 due; in-class writer’s memo.
Readings:
Pimentel, Benjamin, "A New Kind of Street Smarts," (227).
M No class;20 minute conferences today.
T No class;20 minute conferences today.
W Revising for ideas.
H Revising for ideas.
F Revision workshop on Paper #l;4 entries are due
today.
M Discussion of readings.
T Discussion of readings.
W Group reading responses. (You’ll receive topic #2 today).
H Discovering what to write for Paper #2.
F Prewriting workshop.
Readings:
Reitman, Janet, "Warning: Viewer Discretion Advised," (464).
Powers, Ann, "The Stress of Youth, the Strains of Its Music," (480).
M *Rough draft workshop for Paper #2; bring 3 copies of
your paper to class.
T Discussion of readings (Powers, Postman, Bukowski).
W Expanding ideas.
H Revising for readers; expanding ideas.
F *Paper #2 due;writer’s memo; revising for readers.
Readings:
Postman, Neil, "Of Luddites, Learning, and Life," (506).
Bukowski, Charles , "maybe we'll see...," (537).
M Shaping Sentences
T No Classes (Veteran's Day Observed)
W Shaping Sentences.
H Discovering ideas for Paper #3.
F Writing Paper #3
M Writing Paper #3
T *Bring 3 copies of Paper #3 to class.
W No class; 20 minute conferences.
H No class; 20 minute conferences.
F *Paper #3 due; discusssion of readings.
Four journal entries are
due today (last set).
Readings:
John Cloud, "Tracking Down Mom"(181)
Jeffrey Gibson, "Adoption Battles for Gay Prospective Parents"
(159)
Marjorie Ingall, "Alternative Brtide," (334)
Donald Hall, "The Wedding Couple," (352)
M Revision workshop for Paper #3.
T Preparing for the final exam.
W Writing the introduction to your portfolio; constructing
yourself as a writer.
H No Class (Thanksgiving Holiday)
F No Class (Thanksgiving Holiday)
M *Bring 3 copies of your introduction to your portfolio
and a Table of Contents to
Class; submit your anthology
piece.
T Course Review: thinking about English
101; preparing for the final exam.
W Portfolio Workshop (bring your portfolio to class);
group reading of portfolios.
H Present your portfolio to the class.
F *Present your portfolio to the class. All
portfolios are due today.
NOTE: An * indicates you must bring an assignment to class on
this day.
Your final grade in English 100 is based on your portfolio. The
portfolio must hold
between 10and 12 pages of polished work written for English 100 and
should contain
the following items:
• a 3-5 page introduction. The introduction should describe
you as a writer and
inform your readers about the contents of your portfolio, e.g., what’s
in it, why
you selected these particular pieces, how you wrote the selections,
and what they
say about you as a writer, etc. These items should not be discussed
as a list, but as
an essay that reflects on the course and your progress as a writer.
In short, the
introduction is similar to a writer’s memo and should be a space where
you discuss
writing progress and what you’ve learned as illustrated in your portfolio.
• at least one essay (4-6 pages). You may submit two essays if
you wish, as long
as you do not exceed 12 pages. Of course, if you submit more
than two essays,
you’ll need to eliminate some journal entries.
• at least two polished and expanded journal entries. If you are
short in your page
count, you may include more journal entries to reach the required limit.
Deadlines:
Monday, December 1................Three copies of your Introduction
Wednesday, December 3.......... Portfolio rough draft (for peer review)
Friday, December 5.................. Two copies of the final portfolio
are due at the
beginning of class.
One copy will remain in my office; the other will be returned to you.
Your final
portfolio will be evaluated by me and read over by one other professor.
You may
pick up your portfolio on Thursday, December11, in Humanities 328.
If you can’t
pick up your portfolio, it will remain in HU 328 until February.
If you provide a
self-addressed, stamped envelop, I will mail your work to you.
Your portfolio is part of your final exam. Consequently, your
reviewer will expect
you to have spent a great deal of time on your portfolio. Since
your reviewer will
not know what we did in our English 100 class, you’ll need to contextualize
your
portfolio selections, explain the assignments for each essay, and names
of readings
and authors you’re referring to in your writing.
Your goal is to show your reviewers how well you not only write, but
also how well
you can discuss your own writing. Remember: your introduction should
focus on the
contents of your portfolio, not on English 100.
Here are some questions to ask yourself:
1. Which writings are you going to put in your portfolio and why?
2. What is the purpose of your introduction?
3. How have your referred to your selections to illustrate your
point?
Tips:
a. Don't forget to focus on your writing and reading, not
on English 100.
b. Your goal is to analyze your writing and show what is significant
about your
portfolio
c. Your introduction should have a thesi
d. Quote from your selections when necessary to clarify your
analysis.
Assignment:
Bring 3 copies of your introduction to class on Monday, December 1.
Name:__________________________________________
Unacceptable In Progress Satisfactory Superior
Introduction
• Quality of Discussion
________________________________________
• (Self analysis/reflection) ________________________________________
• Central Focus
________________________________________
• Idea Development
________________________________________
• Clear rationale for each ________________________________________
Portfolio piece
Writings
• Quality of Discussion
_____________________________________
(analysis & reflection)
• Organization
_____________________________________
• Supporting examples
________________________________________
• Effective sentences
_____________________________________
• Effective Paragraphs
Portfolio
• Sense of you as a writer
_____________________________________
• Proofreading
_____________________________________
• Overall Effectiveness
______________________________________
Portfolio Grade: U IP S S+
Strong: Meets all the requirements for the portfolio in
an exceptional way. The intro
shows a clear understanding of the writer’s perspective on writing,
revision, and
development of ideas. Uses examples and details effectively,
clearly states a main
point, and writes with a sense of style appropriate for the audience
and topic. Displays
a few errors and uses sentences and paragraphs effectively. Ready
for English 101.
Satisfactory: Meets all the criteria for the portfolio.
Shows a developing writer who
moves beyond stereotypical responses and uses examples and details
to support points.
Contains some awkward sentences, but overall reads smoothly. Has some
minor errors
and uses sentences and paragraphs adequately. Ready for English
101.
In Progress: Barely meets the criteria for the portfolio.
Displays organizational
problems. Contains some awkward sentences and frequently has
difficulty expanding
ideas or connecting them to a thesis. Content is generally commonplace
responses that
offer surface level discussion of ideas. Contains some minor
errors and a few ineffective
sentences and paragraphs. Will probably need tutorial help in
English 101.
Unacceptable. Does not meet the criteria for the portfolio.
Main points, if any, are
broad and seldom developed. Examples are inappropriate or unconnected
to the point
under discussion. Demonstrates unfamiliarity with course content.
Filled with error,
written on a high level of generality, and seldom completes a discussion
before moving
onto a new idea. Not yet ready for English 101.
Weight for the final grade will be given predominantly to the portfolio. Grade: U S
Satisfactory
This grades means you scored S, or S+ on the portfolio and the final
exam. You met all
course requirements and turned in your journal and exercises on time.
You also missed
no more than four classes. You are ready for English 101.
Unsatisfactory
This grades means you scored IP, S, or S+ on either the portfolio or
the final exam.
You did not meet course requirements and either did not turn in one
or more assignments.
You also exceeded the four absence minimum. Based on work you submitted
this term,
you are not yet ready for English 101 and would benefit from more practice
before you
take that course.